Your report is excellent and the content is all very good. Some of your slides are a little crowded and could be condensed a touch. In order to get D4, you need to re-pitch and not spend so long on the company history as it went on for too long. Pick the most vital information and communicate that to the audience/listener.
As Ellie says really good and MERIT work but a couple of problems to clear up to ensure the merit: 1 - spell psychographic correctly. 2. your point about Lynx being the first men's perfume to suggest it attracts women is wrong - there have been many before this - take a look a this ad from as early as 1976! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dbLM0piFIc8 3. Your point about BCAP codes and speaking with your mouth full seems a bit strange!
Lauren,
ReplyDeleteYour report is excellent and the content is all very good. Some of your slides are a little crowded and could be condensed a touch. In order to get D4, you need to re-pitch and not spend so long on the company history as it went on for too long. Pick the most vital information and communicate that to the audience/listener.
Great start,
EllieB
As Ellie says really good and MERIT work but a couple of problems to clear up to ensure the merit:
ReplyDelete1 - spell psychographic correctly.
2. your point about Lynx being the first men's perfume to suggest it attracts women is wrong - there have been many before this - take a look a this ad from as early as 1976! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dbLM0piFIc8
3. Your point about BCAP codes and speaking with your mouth full seems a bit strange!