Well done you have clearly put a lot of effort into this presentation; I have awarded a merit for this task as you mentioned all of the terms needed and provided lots of really good examples. There are however a few issues that need to be fixed if you want to aim for a higher grade: - there is nothing on consumer products - cable definition is not quite right (look at fibre optic and regular cables) - a satellite slide is out of place - some definitions could be more concise and relevant to 'how we consume media'.
Lauren,
ReplyDeleteWell done you have clearly put a lot of effort into this presentation; I have awarded a merit for this task as you mentioned all of the terms needed and provided lots of really good examples. There are however a few issues that need to be fixed if you want to aim for a higher grade:
- there is nothing on consumer products
- cable definition is not quite right (look at fibre optic and regular cables)
- a satellite slide is out of place
- some definitions could be more concise and relevant to 'how we consume media'.
Well done Lauren,
EllieB